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.:Carry on:. by Favetoni

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Oh Mai Favetoni.
Just Oh Mai.
You have REALLY done it this time! This is really fantastic!
So lets get to critiquing!
I will start with the backgroud; It is fantasically done with a nice Choice of cold meaningful colors. I am totally in love with the way the water blends in with the hills as it gives a forever lasting sense.
Lets get on to the character; It needs a little work on the anatomy but other wise, WOW.I just LOVE how you did the fur, he looks very realistic and the eyes are just so amazing too! The shading looks very proffesional but still needs a little work.
Well done Favetoni, and keep up the amazing work!
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Favetoni Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot for the critique!

Well,I know that there are a lot of things I need to work on.My anatomy SUCKS,I really need to improve it!About the shading,I wanted to make something smooth,and without strong contarsts because of the background and the lighting.
I think I've shown a small improvement at this piece though ^^
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Samooraii Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Small improvement? Ptsh! BIG improvement! Your anatomy is great it just needs a little work. :3
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Favetoni Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It needs a lot of work
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